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    I have been very pessimistic of affairs of the heart. I allowed someone to penetrate me as if he was dissecting me. He scorned my mental. The scar is internal. I still love him though. Diagnosis terminal. Game Over!!!

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    oh no you didn't. girl where did this come from: reminds me of a summary about the USSR writer Dostoevsky. O cont re, painful shi t


    all go to the same place ;all come from dust and to the dust all return. who knows if the human spirit rises upward and if the spirit of the animal goes down into the earth?
    ecclesiastes 3:20-21 :-x

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    it came from me Fashion Yaa.. i've been writing poetry my whole life..even performing spoken word at open mics

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    I knew it, well I congratulate you cause Dostoeyvsky is one of my favorite and his genre of writing is rare. You are unique in your style keep it up, maybe one day you can share one of your spoken word video viral.

    You know what, I wonder if Ghana has spoken word cafe's?


    all go to the same place ;all come from dust and to the dust all return. who knows if the human spirit rises upward and if the spirit of the animal goes down into the earth?
    ecclesiastes 3:20-21 :-x

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    Naana,I studied Fyodor Dostoeyvsky's Crime and Punishment and Poor Folk. I gotta tell ya, i hated it. But after tackling The Double,my perception about the man and his work changed. I may not be his biggest fan,however he has my respect. LOL his style aggravated my dyslexia and other conditions i never knew i had....LOL

    Chanty,you got me at the penetration and dissection lol. you need to post your stuff from your website,i mean your material set to music.
    I like your work,short but loaded.
    Beware lest you lose the substance by grasping at the shadow. ~Aesop

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    Bro, same here, i have a lot of respect for Dostoeyvsky. Crime and Punishment was a hard read but it was worth the effort - an extraordinary feat of literary accomplishment. I haven't been able to tackle "The Brothers Karamov" , hopefully soon. And, Chant, you should continue writing poetry.

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