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    Default Marital Bliss Irony (Subliminal Poetry)

    Marriage, the infantile barrier to the will.
    Footprints of affection showered with snowflakes of desire.

    Like a broken promise, consciousness rides on a breath of thought.

    Delusion and illusion tamper with rational judgement
    luring perception into a disarrayed stance.

    Quest for happiness permeates the heart with
    a sublime virtue sight cannot touch.

    The heartbeat of man like a grey horizon
    challenges "for better for worse".

    Resolution throws in its own towel offering redemption
    but pride rejects with the chime of time.

    Lurking in the shadows, divorce smiles
    paying tribute to the irony of "i do".

    Love cries with sadness as drizzles of misery
    tugs at the heartstrings.

    With promises unfulfilled, marriage
    moves on to inhabit new hearts.

    - By Neo

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    Godfather Fashion Yaa's Avatar
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    Thumbs up no illussion

    Big up on the balance that you capture with marraige. As a person who was once married I know that this poem captures the aura of love, looming separation, but in the end the strength of marraige is unlike any other. BigUp!!!

    all go to the same place ;all come from dust and to the dust all return. who knows if the human spirit rises upward and if the spirit of the animal goes down into the earth?
    ecclesiastes 3:20-21 :-x

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    Default Thanks Yaa.

    Glad you found it thoughtful.

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