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    I'm losing my identity.Feeling my own insanity
    This love... This life... will be the death of me
    I'm dying inside....... walking around half alive
    It's no wonder why i keep these drugs nearby

    It's like comedy and tragedy .. no simplicity with me
    The comedy is this life................... oh what a joke
    I find a way to laugh......................puff puff pass
    It's why i smoke

    The tragedy is this love................it cuts like a knife
    Like a blade in my side ..........I just wanna get high
    So.. i could do a little coke ..take a toke of smoke..start to choke
    Might be at the end of my rope..Then i think again Oh What A Joke
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    I'm losing my identity.Feeling my own insanity
    This love... This life... will be the death of me
    I'm dying inside....... walking around half alive
    It's no wonder why i keep these drugs nearby

    Is it a womans place to step down for a man?
    To climb in a shell for fear of his hand?
    Love should bring strength...But around him I'm weak
    How deep will I go....And to what length of...

    Losing my identity..Feeling my own insanity
    This love..This life...Will be the death of me
    I'm dying inside..walking around half alive..
    It's no wonder why i keep these drugs nearby
    Last edited by Enchantress; 15th October 2010 at 03:58 AM.

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    One thing that can keep me grounded is the son that i have
    Without any weed he can still make me laugh
    He brings me pleasure through any kind of weather
    With him by my side i can weather the storms
    And without any coke he can keep my heart warm
    He gives me calmness throughout all this mayhem
    I honestly don't know where I'd be without him
    He gives me purpose.. a reason for living..and through him I could

    Find a new identity.. regain my own sanity
    His love in my life..It could resurrect me
    I'd feel more alive..hold my head up high
    Then to these drugs i could say bye-bye
    Last edited by Enchantress; 15th October 2010 at 03:59 AM.

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    He needs me ..might die without me ..but he gives me life
    HE NEEDS ME..MIGHT DIE WITHOUT ME..
    BUT HE GIVES ME LIFE
    He helps me out of my shell. and out with me...he's standing next to me
    Ready to hold my hand... willing to walk with me..He's my Savior you see
    From this fuked up society.. and I've come to the reality...That through him

    I've Found Me!!!!!!!!!!

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    Bravo Enchantress,
    Your play on words and grammar starts and ends making so much sense. It felt like the best lesson a person could get in life. Thanks for the way you captured personal growth in its real sense, I like how you staged it a lot because even though i have never been a parent, I know for a fact having a purpose in life is not arrived at so easily, it takes true despair to finally decide to live a life that is mutually beneficial.


    all go to the same place ;all come from dust and to the dust all return. who knows if the human spirit rises upward and if the spirit of the animal goes down into the earth?
    ecclesiastes 3:20-21 :-x

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    Thanks for the feedback Yaa.. Your appreciation and insight to my writings inspires me to write more. Thank u for that dear

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    No problem, just keep them coming Enchantress.


    all go to the same place ;all come from dust and to the dust all return. who knows if the human spirit rises upward and if the spirit of the animal goes down into the earth?
    ecclesiastes 3:20-21 :-x

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    Enchantress, what's the point in having to separate them ? If they are in stanzas couldn't you have put them all together on the first post and then indicating the stanzas or what ever you want to call it ? Anyway nice thoughts you put out there.

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    it was too long to post on one thread bboyt

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    Looks like we have a healthy debate. Good!
    I thought it was intentional, but it still doesn't change my views, cause it is visually symbolic of being torn in two then in the end you find a reason to be whole .... Brilliant


    all go to the same place ;all come from dust and to the dust all return. who knows if the human spirit rises upward and if the spirit of the animal goes down into the earth?
    ecclesiastes 3:20-21 :-x

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    Enchantress, how about some new works of poetry......ive just discovered writing sonnets and you have some like that


    all go to the same place ;all come from dust and to the dust all return. who knows if the human spirit rises upward and if the spirit of the animal goes down into the earth?
    ecclesiastes 3:20-21 :-x

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    Too many Bumps!
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