View Full Version : losing my identity pt 1

15th October 2010, 03:34 AM
I'm losing my identity.Feeling my own insanity
This love... This life... will be the death of me
I'm dying inside....... walking around half alive
It's no wonder why i keep these drugs nearby

It's like comedy and tragedy .. no simplicity with me
The comedy is this life................... oh what a joke
I find a way to laugh......................puff puff pass
It's why i smoke

The tragedy is this love................it cuts like a knife
Like a blade in my side ..........I just wanna get high
So.. i could do a little coke ..take a toke of smoke..start to choke
Might be at the end of my rope..Then i think again Oh What A Joke

15th October 2010, 03:48 AM
I'm losing my identity.Feeling my own insanity
This love... This life... will be the death of me
I'm dying inside....... walking around half alive
It's no wonder why i keep these drugs nearby

Is it a womans place to step down for a man?
To climb in a shell for fear of his hand?
Love should bring strength...But around him I'm weak
How deep will I go....And to what length of...

Losing my identity..Feeling my own insanity
This love..This life...Will be the death of me
I'm dying inside..walking around half alive..
It's no wonder why i keep these drugs nearby

15th October 2010, 03:53 AM
One thing that can keep me grounded is the son that i have
Without any weed he can still make me laugh
He brings me pleasure through any kind of weather
With him by my side i can weather the storms
And without any coke he can keep my heart warm
He gives me calmness throughout all this mayhem
I honestly don't know where I'd be without him
He gives me purpose.. a reason for living..and through him I could

Find a new identity.. regain my own sanity
His love in my life..It could resurrect me
I'd feel more alive..hold my head up high
Then to these drugs i could say bye-bye

15th October 2010, 03:58 AM
He needs me ..might die without me ..but he gives me life
He helps me out of my shell. and out with me...he's standing next to me
Ready to hold my hand... willing to walk with me..He's my Savior you see
From this fuked up society.. and I've come to the reality...That through him

I've Found Me!!!!!!!!!!

Fashion Yaa
15th October 2010, 06:30 AM
Bravo Enchantress,
Your play on words and grammar starts and ends making so much sense. It felt like the best lesson a person could get in life. Thanks for the way you captured personal growth in its real sense, I like how you staged it a lot because even though i have never been a parent, I know for a fact having a purpose in life is not arrived at so easily, it takes true despair to finally decide to live a life that is mutually beneficial.

15th October 2010, 07:00 PM
Thanks for the feedback Yaa.. Your appreciation and insight to my writings inspires me to write more. Thank u for that dear

Fashion Yaa
16th October 2010, 06:06 AM
No problem, just keep them coming Enchantress.

BBoy T
16th October 2010, 06:30 PM
Enchantress, what's the point in having to separate them ? If they are in stanzas couldn't you have put them all together on the first post and then indicating the stanzas or what ever you want to call it ? Anyway nice thoughts you put out there.

16th October 2010, 09:21 PM
it was too long to post on one thread bboyt

Fashion Yaa
17th October 2010, 05:33 PM
Looks like we have a healthy debate. Good!
I thought it was intentional, but it still doesn't change my views, cause it is visually symbolic of being torn in two then in the end you find a reason to be whole .... Brilliant

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Fashion Yaa
6th January 2012, 10:10 AM
Enchantress, how about some new works of poetry......ive just discovered writing sonnets and you have some like that :)

6th January 2012, 12:38 PM
Too many Bumps!